script polishing 1

Had a few feedbacks from a director and an actor -
the script is good, but the technicality gets increasingly complex. It is essential that I am able to divorce myself from the reality when continuing to polish the script as it's all to easy for me to write soemthing that I relate to and forgetting about the end audience.

I'm currently working on my character study - so I know how to develope the story better and give the character more detail.

I'm also going to start adding in series of questions and sub-script feelings in major scenes. It is becoming more and more apparent to me that since there is no sound, the narrative needs to be well delivered visually - to do that I need my actors to be able to know how to feel.

I'm working on the shooting script. I think it is essential that I don't give too much directions as to where the camera should go within the script as it is irrelevant to the actors. It will also help me straighten out exactly what I'm looking for visually, so to enable further visualizing in my small puny brain.